- REEDIT
- Blue-pencil anew
- Change the changes
- Shorten further, perhaps
- Go over again, as text
- Tweak text anew
- Go over the manuscript again
- Trim again, say
- Find secondary corrections
- Go over with a fine-toothed comb
- Cut and splice further
- Go over proofs again
- Polish again, as an article
- Make more copy changes
- Do more cutting, perhaps
- Change text again
- Cut further, perhaps
- Make additional changes to
- Further shorten, maybe
- Change further, as text
- Make more changes to
- Make a new round of corrections
- Cut again, as a film
- Amend further
- Take back for polishing
- Make a new revision.
- Check a ms. again.
- Go over copy again.
- Read proof, in a way.
- Check anew
- Cut and splice again
- Prepare another draft
- Make further corrections
- Cut some more, maybe
- Further amend
- Go over again with a blue pencil
- Make a long story even shorter?
- Cut again, say
- Emend again
- Blue-pencil again
- Blue-pencil further
- Make more changes, maybe
- Do another round of changes to a manuscript
- Make further corrections to a manuscript
- Make more corrections
- Suggest additional revisions
- Make additional revisions
- Do more cutting in the film room
- Condense again
- Input additional revisions
- Change again, as a manuscript
- Modify anew
- Go over once more
